Sinking Novo Venice finished (sort of)

During my self-imposed week off between working on chapters of the non-fic book I'm co-ghostwriting, I worked on my short story "Sinking Novo Venice." (note the title change from the earlier iteration). Anyway, I got it finished and posted it over at ChristianWriters.com for some feedback. Once that's done, I'll run it through a second draft to polish it and then start shopping it around.

In related news, I started incorporating some of the feedback I got for my previous chapter in the non-fic book I'm working on and incorporated those changes (for the most part) into my text.